Saturday, January 7, 2012

December Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking through the woods,
In the middle of December,
While snow was on the ground,
I remember.
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Alicia Meyers
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Ashleigh Mellon 17 March 2012

this is a great peice, perfectly penned about the snow and harsh December, Man, I like your style, please read my poems of humanitarianism and faith, and Help me find the justice within for disabled and autisitic people like me.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 27 February 2012

Nice poem....great rhymes too. Interesting story line...keep it up

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Subodh Pandey 25 January 2012

a nice and beautifully portrayed write.

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Sylvia Carter 24 January 2012

AWWWW how beautiful is this a man who will step to the rescue and create a memorable moment with his future Good thing.

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John wake 22 January 2012

like the story in the poem, and the last line of pthe poem, overall poems is brillant

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Alex Kult 19 January 2012

your poems are amazing. i especially like this one. i dont even have words to describe it :) youre a great writer

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Ency Bearis 17 January 2012

Beautiful poem with the nice story, nice to remember in December

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Michaela A. 17 January 2012

such an amazing poem i love the love story twist that it results in :) and i hope you become an author too! i would really enjoy reading one of your books! you have great originality, i feel like a part of your poem when i read it...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2012

Walking through the woods, In the middle of December, With my husband, Talking about the good things that we remember... wolf did a trick, what could not be done by stick, you had fine pick, now enjoy lie and be not strict.. i enjoyed poem ////10

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Anhelica Velasquez 16 January 2012

nice write. i like it. seams your a real poet.

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Unwritten Soul 12 January 2012

Nice poem, and it's look like a vampires series made by you hahahaha, it's is a good write, keep it up Alicia_Unwritten Soul

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Lawrence H 11 January 2012

good and lovely poem...this poem is a romance and falling in love...what inspiration for this poem? I may give a rating of 6/10 and can be improved further using shorter phrases or stanza

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Diamond Williams 10 January 2012

I love it..started off sad an anticipating ended happy an full of romance

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Rajendran Muthiah 10 January 2012

Perfect alternate rhyming words all the stanzas have except one. A threatening experience before the love begins as we see in most of the Tamil language films(cinemas) . If this is a personal poem, best wishes for a long, happy married life. A nice reading poem. Cheers!

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Deep Mukherjee 10 January 2012

it is january here but your poem has rejuvenated the spirit of december :)

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Dave Walker 10 January 2012

A great poem with a beautiful ending. A fantastic write.

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Wahab Abdul 10 January 2012

a very powerfull story...metaphorical too....full of love and passion...nice poem i like it .....please read my new poems...

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Dead Rose 10 January 2012

I like this poem, , , mix of passions........10**** Rose

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Dead Rose 10 January 2012

I like this poem, , , mix of passions........10**** Rose

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Girra Pierre 10 January 2012

what a sweet poem....bit and pieces makes me sad...when i remember some of the happy time of my life that no longer exist.........

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Alicia Meyers

Alicia Meyers

Greenville, South Carolina
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