'Tis the perfect time to remember
O, I recall all to this December
Those burning embers
Of my smouldering souls' chambers;
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u write pretty gud, i mean great command on words. jus 1 thing, d 2nd last line, is it meant 2 be load?
Fantastic array of thoughts and emotions. Great stuff for coming January! Marks 10++++ Rekhamandagere
filling of heart's bowl! ! ! you are crying for the moon...
Thanks again Vipins for this lovely poem. The words are wondrously selected. I felt drifted unto the highest mountains of hope. I feel revigurated and quench of my long thirst. You are a great poet....Virginia
Fashionable write with a wonderful modest mood. Glad to have read it!
Fashionable write with a wonderful modest mood. Glad to have read it!
beautiful really...i have just read this one..liked it..good composition
excellent poem... it depicts authentic longing... and has some excellent word and rythym for the most.
Nice poem, it's very well written. Great job! Keep up the good work.
great poem and well written, , , it reminds us again that December is here now...
good prayer...bringing many thoughts to mind....beautiful
(njan cake kazhichondanu december vayikunnad, kollam to) nice...well written. beautiful poem
grt poem... since it z frm ur pen, there is no surprise