Monday, May 4, 2009

Deceiving Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's in those eyes I crumble.
They break me down, and make me weak.
You're searching for something with your gaze,
and I am overcome with a sudden, consuming fear.
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EmmaLeigh Smith
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Lady Grace 29 May 2009

i like the flow of this poem..but the ending, is it provoking? ..grace

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 May 2009

A unique expression of love, dont love, broken-heart........One of the best I ever read..........10++++++

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