Thursday, May 3, 2018

Deceived Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never knew our story would be bound to turn,
A heart breaking one, that'll actually burn,
Never knew you could be so rough,
Even a single "Hii! ! " now seems tough.
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Ezra Juellinge
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Arifa 19 July 2018

Nice poem

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Chinedu Dike 04 May 2018

Deep passionate poem conveying hurtful feelings, written with clarity of thought and mind. Sad tale of love told in eloquent finesse. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Ezra.

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Ezra. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Marai 03 May 2018

It is so touching. Loved I. Keep it up. I know Ho it feels when someone deceives you.

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