Deceived Comments

A story about a lady on the rebound of a broken relationship. At her most vulnerable time, with judgement impaired she tries to find that same quality of love again. It's never easy. Another great piece, Lorraine.

A heart wrenching emotional write, yes the deceivers breaks the loving heart into pieces what can't be united. It happens in the cruel earth and we have to take this pain. Lora, I realize this and agree that who ever says what, nothing can compensate it. But only I wish you have something else which may tranquil your pain.... A very truthful write.

Your poem makes me think that sad mood invents very emotional poems. Lora, I think this poem of yours clearly expresses your dissatisfaction with your current life. i wish to inform you that, there is hope as long as there is life. Dont soak yourself so much in sadness as that may lead to a form of depression. Just have hope within you and try as much as possible to love yourself as well. I like this poem a lot....... it is so emotional and heart striking..... Well done!

I take heart from this poem Lora. I believe the deceivers in love can't steal the entire heart but some part always survives to regrow.

I was blind once, and burned, almost to my ruin. Your beautifully sad words ring true far too often for far too many people.