Deceit Comments

when you glow in the sun bathe in the dewy rain you'll forget in that morrow all of today's pain. Truly a beautiful passage, poignant and soulful, although its lovely to have a pet, to have one that is trapped in a limited environment such as a bird is not a pet but a prison. Excellent love song for nature

Unfortunately love birds cannot survive in the open sky after being tamed at home for sometime! They will be hunted down by other predators! An enjoyable read! !

lovely writing enjoyed very much the read

beautiful poetry.reading again.