Thursday, January 22, 2015

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For a second I believed,
The thought of you needing me,
But it was a cry; in the darkened sky,
Those words were nothing to see,
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Joshua Hillard
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Thomas Plotz 31 October 2015

I believe your anger is an outreach for love. Great poem. Thanks. T.

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Rajnish Manga 22 January 2015

Thanks for this wonderful poem which has mesmerized me to read it again and again. The poem may have a desperate situation as a backdrop but the narrative is full of energy. Great piece of poetry.

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Gajanan Mishra 22 January 2015

tales to fond, I like it, thanks,

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