Tuesday, November 13, 2018

Debts Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the seasons leave colours on the leaves
When the buds leave blooming aspirations
When the dying day leaves colours in the horizon
I regret, I have nothing with me to leave for you
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2021

Sir, this is a beautiful poem. Appreciated the theme and the expression as well.

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Bindu Dijish 02 July 2019

So simple yet beautifully conveys emotion.

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Thank you Bindu Dijish. Our debts to many animate and inanimate beings around us always remain unpaid and pass to forgetfullness. The poem is a reminder. Hope you will continue to read other poems too.

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Valsa George 29 March 2019

We owe much to many things and people! We owe to God, fellow beings and Nature! Our debt piles up day by day! But we cannot repay all that we receive. What we can do is stay grateful to all that brings sunshine into our lives! A beautiful poem!

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VIJAYA 25 January 2019

No one can repay allthe debts

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2019

The dawn knocks at the door with a bright day The dusk with a bunch of charming dreams a beautiful poem my dear Paramewaran Nair. very vivid and clear expressions.. tony

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Leela kumari R 01 January 2019

A philosophical poem. Remarkable poetic talent.

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Prabha Nair 20 November 2018

you describe nature wonderfully in your poems

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Thank you Prabha. Nature is inseperable companion

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Jayachandran 16 November 2018

thoughtful verses from the poet on the last journey of life

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Thank you Jayachandran for the appraisal

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Devi Krishnakumar 16 November 2018

A beautifully crafted poem.

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Thank you Devi for the comments

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