Debt Of Expectations Comments

This is a brilliant poem! The issue of a modern society that controls us through economic bondage and keeps us so busy we can never fully exercise our freedoms is one of those hidden causes that surface from time to time. Your poem shines a glaring light on the manipulation of people, the numbing of their senses so they don't respond, their despair. You reveal the issue with remarkable CLARITY; from now on, it won't be possible to ignore these negative things, and the powers-that-be are exposed in all of their hypocrisy. Good work, soldier!

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