Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Debt Comments

Rating: 4.8

This cage I call consciousness
Reminds me everyday
Of mistakes I have yet to pay
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Violet Val
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David Beckham 04 March 2011

It only gets stronger here. I felt the force behind this. The message is couldnt be any clearer. At odds with self and seeking 'sanctification'. This is a work of genius. Carry on.10/10

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James Fumich 06 June 2009

i really enjoyed reading this poem... it reminds me of some stuff i think about everynight befor bed... i wont go into detail as it is personal... but im adding this to my favorite poems list.. thanks for shareing it

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Toni Bellanger 04 June 2009

That was so good. just dramatic enough.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 June 2009

This cage I call consciousness Reminds me everyday Of mistakes I have yet to pay The debt we owe to ourselves. Great write, Catatonic..........10/10.

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~ Jon London ~ 17 April 2009

We question what we do through life, its good for the soul to reflect, it allows us in time to move on. Its finding the key to the restraints thats the hard bit. Great piece

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