Sunday, August 3, 2008
Deaths Door Comments
Rating: ★4.5
God, no, no, no, tell me it ain't so!
Say it's not true, my heart you pulled in two.
Awake me from this awful dream, heads bursting, need to scream!
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Javier Falcon
10 August 2008
Well written, strong emotions which really help pull out your message... Good write...
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7/28/2025 1:26:06 PM # 1.0.0
an emotional write your words describe the pain and discomfort unfortunately things happen and we do not know or understand why, , someday we will know and until that time know that we all feel the pain and heartbreak, , as well others may know similarly of your loss, , blessings..Cecil