Friday, April 15, 2011

Deaths. Comments

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the sudden death of a sister & brother.
sister younger & brother older to my father.

for months sister suffered with pain,
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Arfa Iris
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Philip Jose 24 June 2011

highly emotional, how do u manage this rhyme? , Great!

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J'sN Young 18 April 2011

Wow they say the best poems come to you from the heart and soul when your filling the Blues. Sorry this loss has happened to you. The poem was well put and made me fill for your loss

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Arfa Iris

Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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