Death! ...You Thief Comments

Don't you dare to scrub this dirt out of the surface of the 'once polished' bath... desinfect and touch only the area you need to use... Great write - it shows the image of the thief in a bright light of the truth which takes of the mask he puts on for robbing...

Very harsh poem about the reality of thieves. I'll say this, though, that I'd rather not be a thief caught by you. It is sad how lives can be flipped upside-down in situations such as being robbed. I love when writers create a story, almost, for the readers. When you can see the house being robbed, the distraught owners of the house, it draws you in more. And, when a poem draws you in, it's certainly good enough to be appreciated well. This poem should change people's views of thieves, that I am certain of.