Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Death With God Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death comes, and death strikes,
It comes and takes our lives.
Death can come and get anyone at all,
Watch your step, be careful of the eternal fall.
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Tiffany Wolf
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Robert Davis 02 November 2009

10. beautiful....... you're a very talented poet: ]

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Aleksandra Lachut 07 February 2009

I totally agree with Frank and C.R it is a really beautiful poem but everyboday has to die someday.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 30 January 2009

what a lovely poem..and at this age..iam sorry for saying that..love for god is true only when your young..have your fun and see him in all your fun..let him grow with you

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Allan Macli Borges 28 January 2009

well, i really don't care about death or god, but you did a great work here...regards

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Joseph Poewhit 27 January 2009

Could just be the last heartbeat.

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