Sunday, November 8, 2009

Death Wish Comments

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I lay
On the bed
Looking at your face.
You've sat there
...
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Nyl Revol
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Penney Cooper 08 November 2009

this really took me in and entices me to read more. not sure about the twist. you change from you to him i'm intrigued!

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