Death Wish! Comments

Distantly watching me like a hawk in the sky I can’t see him but I feel him with all my senses I f......... it is helpless situation when we are nearing an end... what a words from poet, , , , all real...10 read mine bidding farewell... i could hear and sun

Wow... Magnificient! It carried me away. So affective way of writting. You sadened me, that you're saying your death is for the best. Why? Do you believe that while you're living youre making things worst. Your so melancholic, You sound like me. The part that you wish that your death will bring ur family closer' is kinda true. That family is only reunited if some one pass away. But wait d0nt die hold on. Live, cause i want u to keep writing ur beautiful poems. I love this poem by d way. S0 10++