Wednesday, November 27, 2019

Death: Why We Avoid It…[ Choices; Dying; The Unknown; A Bummer **! ; Personal & Not ] Comments

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My own death I sometimes ponder.
Will I say, while dying, to ‘1st-Responder' ***:
"Just make me comfortable, if you can;
on Earth I've had a satisfactory lifespan.
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Bri Edwards
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Aniruddha Pathak 03 December 2019

Three points: No one has any problem with death, except that no one wants it now. No doubt the poem has some brilliant moments, but... But all this trouble to tell us that your name Bri rhymes with die?

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Savita Tyagi 01 December 2019

If death could come as easy as I always wish it to be.....yes it would be a good choice but if it is as hard as doing rhymes (speaking just for myself) then I am doomed.....I would rather stay alive and read few more of your rhymes.....

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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2019

Well it will take a couple of bottles of rum to think serious about it... until then I will re-read your poem (maybe until I die?)

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Bri Edwards 27 November 2019

Dear bri, To MyPoemList. The author is ALREADY in my list of favorite poets! ! He's a REAL GEM! ! ! HA HA. BRI :) p.s. did ya ever notice that " bri" rhymes with " die" . some have thought my 'pen name' rhymes with " gee'.

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