Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Death We Think Comments

Rating: 3.0

The time is almost up,
everything is going down,
can't take seeing you like this,
It makes me really frown.
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martine boucher
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 September 2008

This started off pretty well, but it sort of faded at the end. There were word problems and others but it was the loss of rhyme that really hurt the most. GW62

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