my love
my straight
nakedness
wants to be sucked
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'it's the trauma a man suffering by heart to be a poet at last' - well said!
" it's the trauma a man suffering by heart to be a poet at last" . Congrats on poem of the Day.
I'm afraid the poem contains more nakedness than was desired. I would like to repeat the words of Malabika Ray: 'Very modern poem with philosophical thoughts! I am trying to find the connection between the title and the theme! A little intriguing for me! ' Thanks & Congrats.
Not yet exposed the face without mask. It needs another degree of talent, perhaps not yet achieved the height..... Thank you for your wise interaction.
True love! ! Willingly. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray for winning the prize, but your poetry speaks a lot about trauma and man's suffering. True sad but a beautiful poem, it deserves this place. God's Blessings, Pranab!
Warm with inspiring tune of soul touches softly. Inspired. Thank you very much.
Warm with the inspiring tune of soul touches softly. Thank you very much.
It 's the trauma a man suffering by heart to be a poet at last......outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.
Very modern poem with philosophical thoughts! I am trying to find the connection between the title and the theme! A little intriguing for me! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you poet. Here poet himself also confused with the random happenings of his surroundings... Title finally can't be told except child prose written to advice.. Inspiring your interaction. Thank you very much.
time demands their real faces, the treacherous minds which are hidden in good veiling........! allegorical poem; beautifully penned; thanks for sharing
Good soul! Your inspiration charge me again to thought with words. Thank you much.
It's the trauma a man suffering by heart to be a poet at last.....thought provoking expression! Many congratulations for this brilliant work being chosen as Poem of the Day!
my love my straight willing pronouncing loudly your by by hard haunting superb write great 10++++++++++++
Nice fisrt image. It is bold and clear. Intresting piece