Tuesday, June 9, 2020

Death To Death Comments

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…I stoned the lord of death to death
we lye, now, side by side

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Clive Culverhouse
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Varsha M 09 June 2020

I stoned the lord of death to death.... beautiful. As effigy of countless revolution and massacre.... very true. With the lamb gathering stones.... So our perspective makes all things. But ultimately only destined things only happen. The moment is intercept the concept of lamb, we get the rebirth. Insightful work. Admirations.

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Clive Culverhouse 09 June 2020

your thoughts and your time in responding to my poetry is hugely appreciated thanks for commenting on my poem death to death..,

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Clive Culverhouse 09 June 2020

we get the rebirth and with the use of the … (dot dot dot) we can start the poem from the beginning - getting a rebirth!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 June 2020

beyond soils of new shoots I, a deserter I, a warrior I, a beggar I, a zealot......awesome expression there is death and rebirth

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Clive Culverhouse 09 June 2020

thanks so much for your time in commenting on my poem death to death, very much appreciated., ,

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