Thursday, September 11, 2014

Death Sprung Sudden Bitter Sting Comments

Rating: 3.7

by dawn's grey light fading night
still waxen body ghosts waits...
shade when will you need spent
in clay broken rent husk release?
...
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Terence George Craddock
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Michael Walker 23 June 2016

Your thoughts on death strike a chord with me. Body and soul.

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Terry Craddock 23 June 2016

this poem and style is not one that I thought would strike a chord many would readers, disjointed juxtaposed images beyond the mirror conveys meaning I want impose and it was fun to write

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 September 2014

Death Sprung Sudden Bitter Sting crown is so beautiful poem as a whole nice

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Gajanan Mishra 11 September 2014

soul essence, fade memory, I like it.

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