Death (Senryu) Comments

I loved the poem it help me with my project thanks

death doesn't choose, does it?

Why indeed Sandra, life is most unfair, 10 for you Lynda xx

Who can know the secret of this paradox of life? ....Wonderful poem.......10+++++

Why do the good guys Have to suffer and die young While the crooks survive This fact really hurts me too. Great write.10.

In life many questions go unanswered, life can be both happy and sad, to lose someone close is very sad, to lose to an act of violence we always question why. You have expressed your feelings very well in these three senryu's.

yes...very true.... a sincere poem...loved it. a paradox. thank you.

Strong writing for all three Senyru Sandra. Anger is part of the grieving process, but so hard to get through. I am sorry for your loss too! Thank God for poetry Sandra. love Karin 10

It's quite painful to lose a person whom we are close to, as they are our support, our pillar and strength. It's always the good who go early, which is a life's mystery. It will be tough, but life goes on, as decided by the One Above.

Yes, sandra; even after being aware of human mortality, death of a near or dear one leaves all of us shattered. I think; it still is the cruelest act on surviving ones. Very well written, keep it up!

lovely third verse...really do not know..what god want's to proove

This is an excellent senryu triplet, Sandra, perfect in syllable count in each poem, and very well expressed as well. Though not the most pleasant of subjects, you wrote three very impressive senryu poems. Carl.

yes, the grief and pain leaves one devastated.

life teaches lots of lessons, but some questions remain unanswered. thoughtful Senryu, Sandra love Mamta

Fate is often cruel...Anger fills the void..You have concluded the first two with strong statements....my answer to your question in the third one is...'they are let alive only to be punished severely....sensible write....and I feel sorry for that friend...thanks for sharing this