**death's Song** Comments

Death holds lives in hands. Death is truth and it has a tune of loneliness. Again death plays with loneliness and depression. This provokes thought. Death keeps his tune with a flute. We hear its tune through shadows. An amazing poem is excellently penned.

woahnesss! ! ! another awesomific write xP loved it i did! !

WOW! Great wording, theme. Chilling and beautifully written. I wrote a poem 'Whispers' - very similar.Check it out! Keep writing- you have amazing talent! ! !

This is beautiful! Every single line! I love it! I never would have even thought about this, but it's such a great metaphor!

of the layers of dark corridors and dark passageways of people's worst nightmares, and the last thing you'll ever hear, is the death's tune loud and clear....very good write and impressive.. death is reality and got to be accepted with grace......10 read mine mournful songs....go back.....could hear, , sun sets in

I think this is great writing. The ending is just right. (I think Death might play saxophone sometimes, too- he can be so flashy at times) smiles, Patti

This poem is very interesting. made me think about when I die.

This poem scared and enlightened me at the same time, Pure fire! *Snaps* 10/10

very well written - will save this as a fav - 10++++

fantastically written.. good going poet..

Awesome poem. Well written. I feel as if most of us know the tune of death, i know i do.

Tyease this poem is really good i love it! ! keep up the good writing :)

very nice.... I like it.. Great poem..