Friday, March 21, 2008

Death’s Relief Comments

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He lay there quietly waiting

Eyes fading with constant pain
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Anita Atina
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Vaibhav Shah 04 April 2008

Terrific description of death in the most beutiful way.I hae also described in my poem 'I feel You Death'. Please go through it also.Lovely style and nice vocab.

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Abha Sharma 23 March 2008

so touching..you personified DEATH in front of the readers..

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Michael Pruchnicki 21 March 2008

fantastic doesn't adequately convey my reaction!

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