Monday, May 6, 2013

Death's Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am death and I welcome you with a kiss
And gently hold your hand as you drift off into bliss.
Do not fear me as I welcome one and all
At the end of all your days, at the end of your summer ball.
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David Wood
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Kavya . 25 June 2013

a very nice poem penned very beautifully David!

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Patti Masterman 14 May 2013

I like how death is both fearful and a friend at the end, and how you seem to have captured that idea in this one.

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Cosmic Dreamer 12 May 2013

Death is merely the recycler of life... A very nice poem, I really like it...

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Lyn Paul 08 May 2013

Excellent David, I am an ex Funeral director and have alot of understand with death and dying. Really beautiful and one to save.

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Valerie Dohren 07 May 2013

None of us know what death is like - for some it seems peaceful, with a kiss, but for others there is much suffering. Well written poem David, flows beautifully with good rhyming.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 May 2013

unavoidable beauty once acquired keep within never tell to anybody Mr David topic of choice is mine too beautiful

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Dave Walker 07 May 2013

Like it, it's something a lot of people don't like to talk about. My only worry is, will it take me up or will it take me down. A great poem.

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Valsa George 07 May 2013

Death comes as an unexpected visitor! (A friend or a fiend, we do not know! Everything depends on how we look upon it) A poem stirring up deep reflections in the mind! !

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