Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Death's Fortress Comments

Rating: 4.5

Death's fortress made of ash
Cemented by blood
Floats from captured spirits
Unforgiving for mistakes
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Amy Fifita
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Siddartha Montik 25 July 2009

..even if it is dark, a good expression.. and nicely penned! Thank you!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 02 June 2009

Fortress of death giving me a creepy feeling.................A Good Write............

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Keshav Prasad 02 June 2009

am not able to see through this poem...wonder in what mood has it been written....but interesting indeed, too dark it seems...

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