Thursday, August 28, 2008

Death's Drink Comments

Rating: 5.0

Death bestows me it's drink of mezmerization,
A goblet of blood-red wine, so divine,
Yet so bitter to the taste and smell of a thousand corpses.
At the first sip, I can feel the blood in my vains freeze,
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Vampire Heart
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i relly like your poetry its very good i really do like dark poetry

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Tyease Collins 07 October 2008

hehehe I really like this poem. It's so evil and so awesome to read >: ] I really like this poem -Tyease C.

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Ershad Mazumder 01 September 2008

Its really very poetic.Read Rumi, Khayyam and Ghalib to know what love really is.

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I love it. especially the ending. good work

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Apathetic Syndrom 31 August 2008

very visual.you can really capture the esence.

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Demon lover 31 August 2008

very beautiful and i love it as well

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Sage of Time 29 August 2008

OoOoOoOoO! ! ! ! ! i love it espeacialy cause death is in it [my hero! ] <3

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