There’s no moon to shine
On the solemn night
The stars has siege, prior to dawn
Death has painted the skies dark
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Great expression used in this fine example of your qualities my brother, Genius visual imagery...Fabulous creation. Best wishes Jon
wow sulaiman you seem to know quite a lot about this. working in that environment? keep going.
Death has painted the skies dark Like a grave.............the immaculate imagery, the vocab... all unite to make a wonderful verse.
Very powerful and evocative. No moon should shine on such a solemn night. As always, Sandra
We share similar feeling on the subject. Read my 'In Death Row' poem and let know know what you think.
Your words bring life to a tragic event