Monday, January 14, 2008

Death Row Swan Song Comments

Rating: 4.8

There’s no moon to shine
On the solemn night
The stars has siege, prior to dawn
Death has painted the skies dark
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
ngaio beck 17 August 2009

Your words bring life to a tragic event

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Trinidad Villafranca 20 May 2008

This was so good like great job i cryed alittle

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~ Jon London ~ 19 May 2008

Great expression used in this fine example of your qualities my brother, Genius visual imagery...Fabulous creation. Best wishes Jon

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John Tiong Chunghoo 31 March 2008

wow sulaiman you seem to know quite a lot about this. working in that environment? keep going.

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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

Death has painted the skies dark Like a grave.............the immaculate imagery, the vocab... all unite to make a wonderful verse.

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Sandra Fowler 21 March 2008

Very powerful and evocative. No moon should shine on such a solemn night. As always, Sandra

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Al Ramos 01 March 2008

We share similar feeling on the subject. Read my 'In Death Row' poem and let know know what you think.

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