IM FALLING DOWN I CANT STAY ON,
IT WAS ALL RIGHT BUT NOW ITS WRONG
AND ALL I EVER DO IS RUN.
IM GOING IN THE GREAT BEYOND,
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Well brandon this poem is well written but I did not like it because it is full of evil darkness.I don't like poems like this they are full of the devil and thats not good. But keep writting never stop, you just need to choose to write something that doesn't sound like your worshiping satan.
Dude this is the best poem I have ever read like no lie duder.....
Evil, but good, I give it a 9 and not a 10 because life isn't a game, life is life and only when it's squandered is it a game, keep writing though