Death Room Comments

Great poem inspired by another great poet. loved it.

amazing poem man. :)

Very good poem Dave. Very moving too.

Powerful poem. With a beautiful flow to it. Great work.

accepting one's fate in such a situation is the only way to be free. there is no mystery in death only in life and that is the prison in which we live. nice write

interesting poem..tempts to make one think of those hours!

Good style and pacing to a strong finish for a interesting subject.

Lovely, striking, emotional. This makes me think of what it would be like to be on death row. Great brain food.

I heard Bob Dylan singing 'Knocking on Heaven's Door, ' in my mind, while reading this. It forms questions, and that's what I like... Food for thought.

no one can take away a man's true freedom... we are imprisoned by our bodies... much as they often imprison our bodies wrongfully... you cover this subject with a thoroughness, and with insight. very good poem. thank you!

A great poem inspired by another great poet...fantastic concept..melancholy, yet strangely sweet and soothing? ? This was an intriguing and touching write. -SG

Dear Dave, the meaning s of your words are really so great also it can has a lot of symbolics meanings.The room of death can be the world where we live.Yes really somethimes we feel that we can't easlyy breath, we are imprisoned.We all looking after a peaceful place where we can be free happy.Well done dear Dave. By the way the only thing that i hope you don't mentioned it is suicide, this feeling never gives any pleasure it always be with a great doom and gloom.

The reason why i keep reading your works is because you have all senses that i like, this one for example feel close to me, the way you deliver it, it's enchanting...It scoring a dark background, chill on nerves but the meaning so utterly spoken..Dave, this is good work and i enjoyed the flow very much, thanks to Eric for his Inspiration too....by the way dont you feel something following you back when you leave the room...ghost maybe hahahahaha i 'm joking: p _Keep writing more episode of your thought :) _Unwritten Soul