Death Revolution Comments

Dear Aiswarya, It is a wonderful poem, this was the age when I also discovered my talent to write but I truly started writing only after some many years. Observation, dedication, gaining vocabulary right from this early age will give you a head start in the world of poets where all are equal. You have the encouragement, suggestions and guidance which was not available to us then because of the advantages and platform you have here at PH. Read a few of Robert Del Real's poem he is also a boy of 13 years only but he also talks of issues which affect children his age in the setup of his country, through his eyes. I am a friend of Premji's and it was he who has recommended you to me, I thank him. Angel

Bravo! Another brillaintly creative poem by my dear talented poet Niece Aisu; Indeed, the Sun's revolution is the action by a heavenly body going round in an orbit The Earth cooling while the Sun's energy has created a garden of Life upon its crust. Death is the miraculous recycling that is ever replenishing.(I quote the wisdom on a dipping tea tab of 'Yogi Tea') 'When you know that all is light, you are enlightened' May you write, share and reflect upon all of life, Humanity especially, with your youthful gift for profundity. Just as you've chosen me as your 'Uncle' mentor, So you will also surely be and Aunt and Mother for listening Hearts and curious Youth, ever searching for answers. Encore w' imagination Your very proud Uncle, ... louie

its almost imposable to think that someone of such a young age can think so deep, but hey! imposable is nothing and if you have the talent...what else can I say hey? your poem is gaurded by sun of all.

like mother some one has to take care.lovely poem.posted 10 for u surya

Wow, i like your poem. So skilled with your words at such a young age. I encourage you to continue.

A very thoughtful and riveted expression on the Sun and its heuristics or hysteria connected to mythological concepts from indianised point of view for a global referendum.A 10 from me of course.

A talented work at an young age. Keep going. 'Death revolution'- this is not actually correct. From death, no life was ever born. Life was there throughout the universe right from big bang in a diffused state. This is to be properly understood. We can't say that there is no life just because we can't perceive it with our senses. May god bless you

So talented at a tender age.Continue writing and you will become a star.

Simple words that have a deep meaning, I appreciate that.

the sun the mother or father to earth.....lovely write.....death or birth revolution

Very well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thanks for your message. Your poem Death Revolution is deep and i like it. Keep up your writing because one day i woulds like to read your book.

you've very good ideas, thats quit marvellos to read how you think keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

very well written....... well done

i know the people of india believes SUN as GOD. u write really outstanding lines and one kind of inspiration thought.. man himself burning for other dats really nice i give 8.5 for poem 1 for two meaning thoughts and 0.5 for u ur r so lil.... i m really proud indian girl for that...10\10 keep it up...........CrisBalm

I like this poem, Very good on a job well done

this is a very interesting poem i like how you connected nature into every bodies life. You see we all live in nature and we are all from nature so you have to learn how to embrace it and learn to live with it.

Very nice indeed. keep on writing.

Sun- the great SURYA BAGWAN- sans HIM no existence will never let us down! A great write! Congratulations!

spoken like a true Truth Seeker that has found the essence of life wrapped in death spoken like realization has spoken to your heart revealing death is just another start of a new life's beginning excellent-very thot provoking..it will force the mind to search the soul for it's self you must believe in yourself believe in yourself believe in yourself