Wednesday, September 30, 2009

Death, Promise A Sweet Goodbye Comments

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if i will die the heaven wish is to cry,
the world will always remember the lasting peace
i've give and the honest wreath of the heart will bloom
as the golden sky lapses my coffin
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Antonio Liao
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Wendelin Weird 30 September 2009

wow I love the imagery and over all poem I hope to write as good as you some day

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Ric Bastasa 30 September 2009

those who wish will die shall wait a longer time. sometimes the gods grant our wishes purposely to punish us.

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