Wednesday, November 28, 2007

Death Poem Comments

Rating: 3.5

Somebody died shamefully and left me all their money.
And so it was, I tried to live just like them
Only to die just as wrecklessly.
I was a ghost for Halloween
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MARINA GIPPS
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William Jackson 07 December 2008

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. I like your poem better. It has a depth and a twist at the end. Money matters little, especially during the gathering of one's soul on All Saints Day due to reckless living. Nice write. Sincerely, William

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brittney vincelette 27 November 2008

it was ok it had a lot of meaning to it but its just i like poems that rhyme no offense like your poem was good but i just more or a rhymeing kinda person

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Aashish Ameya 28 November 2007

very nice poem Marina, most people are answering wrong question in their life..no body to ask right one..i also wrote death poem..read any time

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MARINA GIPPS

MARINA GIPPS

Chicago, Illinois
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