Thursday, December 5, 2013

Death Overcomes Comments

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broken, beaten, left alone
through my eyes love has shone
death cascade all around
blood drips through to the ground
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Cynthia Carpenter
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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

I've just read your poem- 'Death Overcomes'. It is sad and somber. I pray that you overcome your sad feelings and see the joy of life and living. 'These lines particularly made me sad: I'm buried, broken an dead i guess love just filled my head goodbye to all darkness swallows me as i fall'

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Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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