Death On Your Lap Comments

In Your lap death crawled, Grief with fullness dawned, In a single draught drank, the poison with serene throat, A seeker in a sharp linn...

Like a sage You strove, With tender mind and Soul, A mature soul departed, Through your Sky-born self...! ! !

Death strengths life, At the prime of time, You faced death straight, Death happened in your Lap..." " "

Life happens through death, Death nourishes the seed of life, ... Life is nothing but an unsolved riddle, ... These lines stand out in this poem along with the last stanza

Death with dignity of uncertainty, Untimely all the time In Confidence basked it's victory, Life with exigent pull Vaporized, Within the aura of an Infantile prince. //// beautiful poem penned

how about one on the DAYS VIRUS HAVE U READ MY TREMBLING ONE RARE VARIETY OF MY POEM PG

With calm and serene composition, On the lap of time and tide, With meditative state of Being, You discorded the whisper of trice, Allowing divinity to play it's spin.