Monday, March 30, 2009

Death On The Seashore (A Re-Post) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The waves lap against me
Gently, carressingly
Like a lover beckoning me
To lie in his arms
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Sonya Florentino
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Patti Masterman 28 November 2009

I'm glad that you resurrected this because it's lovely. Nobody can make me fall in love with poetry over and over again in quite the same way that you are able to do it..(smile)

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nomad omnia 04 August 2009

Sad, sobering, but beautiful. A really great poem, N

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So powerful, Sonya. I admire your works. This one, however, feels so tragic, and hopeless. Then again, I imagine many of us have been there (or ARE there) , but to put such pain into words is truly brave - I use code! ;) I don't think I have the courage you do to be so honest. Wonderfully melodic.

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Sonya Florentino 30 March 2009

This poem disappeared and I'm re-posting it, together with the original comments below: Date & Time: 2/15/2009 4: 03: 00 AM Poem: 15625374 - Death on the Seashore Member: Anita Atina Comment: Lyrical, and surprising twist to this sad tale

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Sonya Florentino 30 March 2009

Re-posting comment: Date & Time: 2/9/2009 8: 53: 00 PM Poem: 15625374 - Death on the Seashore Member: Mifael Llauderes Comment: remember the butterfly; before it is, it was a worm.

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Sonya Florentino 30 March 2009

I'm re-posting this comment too: Date & Time: 2/6/2009 8: 53: 00 PM Poem: 15625374 - Death on the Seashore Member: kandis salasar Comment: after death, there is new life after every little death we go through there is growth of the spirit. we say yes to death and we welcome a newly born hope...

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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