Death On The Prairies Comments

Melvina I live in the heart of the countryside and we often see road kill, it just breaks my heart. Gods creaturs just crushed to death with not a care in the world. a very sad poem hit me right in the heart. Cheers Sylviex

Yes a very sad poem here, why must man kill for fun...

Melvina; This is sad, we so depend on the Prairie Dogl Prairy Dog ~Haiku Haiku A prairy Dog A Prairie Dog Sits He Barks but not really One The Desert is his Home Thursday, March 31,2005 Charles Garcia

Melvina, being a lover of all of God's creatures large or small I felt this a sad poem. A reflection of life vividly told. The imagery very well done. The writing is excellent as normal. Top marks from me. Thank you for sharing it my friend. Love David

ending is adorable. good subject matter. staccato rhythm. care, sjg