Monday, October 19, 2009

Death On A Tree Comments

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‘Father please take this cup from me’,
Echoed His cry from Gethsemane,
He prayed aloud and He did fret
Droplets of blood ran down as sweat,
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Alf Hutchison
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Henry Brown 31 October 2009

What a sacrifice...what a poem. Alf my friend this poem says it all. What the Gospel is all about. He did for you and for me. I cannot understand it but He knows. I am thankful He did. Thank you for another inspired write

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Elbert Matt Loubser 29 October 2009

Alf! Well done, it is truly a masterpiece. Forgive my absence, varsity has seen the most of my days

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Luwi Habte 25 October 2009

all your poems touch at heart also this one is exciting very well done poet luwi

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Obed Souza 23 October 2009

The greatest expression of love... beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 23 October 2009

The great sacrifice and a great poem......

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Sally Plumb Plumb 23 October 2009

It was a politcal death yo me.

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Ency Bearis 22 October 2009

A heart touching verses.. a thoughts we always in our minds with Jesus Christ sacrifice....excellent write.....10

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Ravi A 22 October 2009

The opening lines clearly told me about the theme. Well versed verses. My view about Christ's crucification is this: - He was very spiritualistic and very well knew about the mortality of body. He accepted his share with grace and without any murmur. He was aware of the fact that nothing could touch his everlasting soul. He was careless as what might or might not affect the body. We can see that all great spiritual seekers hold the same view about body and soul. After his death he actually showed the world through his resurrection that body was mortal whereas soul was eternal. The world has not practically understood this fact. If he had the capacity to resurrect, he certainly had the capacity to escape from being crucified but he did not do so from another point of view also. If he had escaped from crucification, there was every chance of the world asking a particular question at a later stage: - 'If he could profess that body was after all mortal and soul immortal, why he did not accept the way of the cross? '. Atleast one man would ask the question. By accepting the crucification, he had answered the question all by his life. His life was his message. That is his greatness. Another thing. For a great soul like Christ, there was no happiness or unhappiness in life from his level of perception. There was only acceptance of life that meant only the acceptance of all situations with equanimity. Our problem is that we do not wish to accept many situations. We offer mental resistance to many situations and what is the result? We should know to accept every worse situation. Then only we would actually know how to remain mentally calm and get over the situation. Pain doesn't lie in any material situation but it is pure mental. Pain is generated from our mentally rejecting a situation. I am giving this point for anybody's reflection.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 21 October 2009

Death on a tree is a profound account of the the death of Jesus. Good write.

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Obinna Eruchie 21 October 2009

A beautiful and moving take on the passion of Christ during his last hours, when he was crucified on the cross, he became the sacrificial lamb to save us from sin.

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Laurie Hill 21 October 2009

A very moving write Alf.......

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Ken E Hall 21 October 2009

Heartfelt poem of Christ and the last day....you shine the light for us all thanks for the invite regards

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An extremely heart stirring poem as you use your poetical skills to bring to light why our Saviour died and suffered for us. It is written with strength and purpose. 10 love Karin

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An extremely heart stirring poem as you use your poetical skills to bring to light why our Saviour died and suffered for us. It is written with strength and purpose. 10 love Karin

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rago rago 21 October 2009

this is a nice poem expressing the inner conscious too.....thank you for inviting for this...........

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Lady Grace 20 October 2009

a nice piece..three times Jesus was denied by Peter..judas hanged himself on the tree after betraying Jesus...everybody knows'''''who does not pay''....it is the new version of 'JU DAS not pay'......nice piece dear..

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Lady Grace 20 October 2009

a nice piece..three times Jesus was denied by Peter..judas hanged himself on the tree after betraying Jesus...everybody knows'''''who does not pay''....it is the new version of 'JU DAS not pay'......nice piece dear..

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Gold Fish 20 October 2009

Thanks for being BOLD keep increasing awareness by shining the light to the world extinguishing darkness. Poignant poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Surya . 20 October 2009

a nice, beautiful and touching poem. surya

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Surya . 20 October 2009

nice, meaningful and touching poem surya

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