Saturday, September 4, 2021

Death Of The Innocent Comments

Rating: 5.0

My skeleton is blinded
And the hands are bounded
Gagged with the American flag
I lie there in silence with the blood letting out
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Kevin Patrick 06 September 2021

A dark and thought-provoking work, the opening liens grabbed me and hooked me in, your capture the fear and desperation of a tortured person well, it's a poem that embodies human empathy.

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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2021

Profound poetry....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 September 2021

Torture, pains and hardships will fuel our spirit to become stronger. They open an avenue where we can fly and soar without fear. A well crafted write

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 September 2021

A powerful and inspiring poem so well expressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2021

A powerful poem, so very fascinating, it makes my blood stop for a second.!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 September 2021

Your excellent poem shows the dauntless spirit the oppressed can possess, LeeAnn.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2021

But my spirit is free to fly...well done!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2021

Read this excellent poem with interst! My favourite line:

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 September 2021

Very fascinating fantastic poem, great torture occurred. Bravo dear LeeAnn!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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