Your lips are the wet of my blood. Without them I bleed dust
Your voice, the rhythm of my heart. Without it my ventricles lay in silence
Your touch, the nerves of my fingertips. Without it I cannot feel
Your embrace, the light at my center. Without it I see only blackness
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I love this poem it is my favorite yet. Your words are beautiful and deeply writtin. Keep writting more.
i read this poem and it made me do a lot of thinking.... i lost the man i loved most and i dnt knw if i can get him back.... he is off to the military and that means he has the possibility of dying... he was and always will be my world... beach leanbh... thanks for posting this poem... it was the best :))
very poetic huh.! ! but i like it...yes, what is life then, if love elude you..?
i really like this poem. it's just my taste :) some of the diction was a little iffy, so i gave it a nine instead of a ten. all in all i deeply enjoyed this short but sweet poem! :)
Truly a wonderful poem which shows the power of the union of two loving souls. Thanks for sharing, Beach Leanbh. |