Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Death Of Soul Comments

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Alesia Leach 17 October 2014

I like the poem, but maybe the last line should say why should body die since the soul never dies.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2014

I agree with you when a soul forgets the lesson of love it's a living dead soul.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 October 2014

Body dies and soul lives for ever..........well composed

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Lev Brekhman 15 October 2014

A man is dying, a crimson flow, And angel has his soul in tow. Look, think, perceive: The frontier life-to-death is a sieve.

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Ramesh Rai 15 October 2014

Soul is immortal. Hence, question of death for soul does not arise. Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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