Sunday, November 22, 2009

Death Of River Comments

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As the scorching sun gains height,
The river nearby dries up,
The quiescent river never fights,
For its water even a cup.
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Shivam Madeshia
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Ken E Hall 23 November 2009

Good poem with a story welcome to P/H you started of with the best so now so many to read on this site good luck regards

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Ken E Hall 23 November 2009

Good poem with a story welcome to P/H you started of with the best so now so many to read on this site good luck regards

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Julia Pascual 22 November 2009

A very deep and emotional poem you're good.. keep writing =)

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