Death Of My Dream Comments

I like the fifth stanza: This the moment to meet First in a thousand lifetimes Cruel is my fate... she with another not with me. Mmm...This one made me wonder for a few minutes. Its like you made death in the form of a woman in your dreams. And you talk about her like a lover. But its the last stanza that made me wonder because it took a different path. Like now you're in heaven but you saw her with someone else. From death, dreams and now heaven. Well, dreams are always confusing. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

well truly expresses how it feels when our dreams are not fulfilled and when the other person gets the same we hate the dream snatcher... but thats what is reality.. will happen some time or the other. just got to deal with it

I LOVE this poem. one of my favorites. I feel your pain and saddness with each stanza. very well written

really good poem very expressive.10++++

really good poem very expressive.10++++