It seems like Light Years ago
That sweet innocence
Like a flower in the bud
Growing in new existance
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Why thank you Ben, and Ana, and i am sorry Ana, that i amjust now reviewing my stuff. All of the comments are so greatly appreciated. Blessings, Theo
Amazing how you carry the comparison throughout all the phases even after the flower is picked and until it is thrown into the trash. Wonderful insights.
Great work...I like the analogy as a flower...very clever! Top marks! -Michael
Regret for what once was and can never quite be again. Excellent use of metaphor, Theodora. Kindest regards, Sandra
I loved this piece of yours ma'am and i really invite you to read mine as i would like to learn more from you. thank you. regards, Ritika