Saturday, April 14, 2007

~ Death Of Innocence~ Comments

Rating: 4.6

It seems like Light Years ago
That sweet innocence
Like a flower in the bud
Growing in new existance
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Ritika George 22 October 2018

I loved this piece of yours ma'am and i really invite you to read mine as i would like to learn more from you. thank you. regards, Ritika

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Theodora Onken 07 September 2007

Why thank you Ben, and Ana, and i am sorry Ana, that i amjust now reviewing my stuff. All of the comments are so greatly appreciated. Blessings, Theo

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Ben Gieske 07 September 2007

Amazing how you carry the comparison throughout all the phases even after the flower is picked and until it is thrown into the trash. Wonderful insights.

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Ana-kay Rhoden 02 May 2007

Amazing! I could picture exactly what you meant. Love it! ! !

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Michael Fischer 01 May 2007

Great work...I like the analogy as a flower...very clever! Top marks! -Michael

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Sandra Fowler 15 April 2007

Regret for what once was and can never quite be again. Excellent use of metaphor, Theodora. Kindest regards, Sandra

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