^death Of Innocence (2) Comments

Oh How true! Words just cannot describe

And there is such a beautiful sadness as lifes panorama expands....Love your art

your three liner n alternate quatrain proves you an artist who chisels the verse like a sculptor...and in such artistry, you don't let the theme slip by your grip...you are a poetry instructor...so im scared if i said something wrong...but i said what i felt...

Sad indeed, but very beautifUl.

A sad but very beautiful poem, a wonderful write.