Sunday, September 23, 2007

Death Of Desire Comments

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Desire was but a feeble fetes
Lingering in the vacuum
Of my sad heart,
While sound asleep
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Afzal Shauq 26 May 2009

It seems that teenagers Liveliness and hastiness are Not destined for me to heel, Those everlasting wounds, Heart beats are too strong for my style, To bear to fulfill, Hence the desire of my life For living; for life Is born dead. what a sweet verses...love your poems and thsi one is the best one... you seeem to me a good and perfect poetess.. and I went through your few more poems and liked them too... hope my poetry will also touch your sweet heart..I am peace wisher poet with 6 books...

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