Death Of An Innocent (Part 2) Comments

A sad, touching and well illustrated story that really captures the. reader's a immediate attention. I like its rhyming pattern? Thank you for sharing and your valuabe comments on my poems. God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

The best brief tragic story I've ever heard. With huge vista of themes such as love and death and also regret....+10

Emotional and imaginative, it'd be a great story full of imaginative thinking, and you chose the words that suits your point of view in addition to beautiful imagination. perfect as always :) Go on you're tremendous.

the guilty conscience, the intense sense of sin, above all the conflict within are prevailing in the poem.

it sends some shivers... deep n touchig