Death Of A Tear...... Comments

A beautiful and emotional poem with feelings that seem to tighten the throat in an agonising grip.

A beautiful poem, of an amazing depth.

Teardrops are to be treasured as is this poem depicting your emotion and your broken heart for without teardrops how would we release the pain, that awful, aching, pain.

Impressive... so much emotions in one tear!

very moving poem! The way you describe the tear and its path...just wow

To make an inanimate object, like a tear the center of attention is remarkable. I get the gist of what you are saying. An impactful write

Pain and beauty, love it drains away one diminishing tear at a time. I am reminded of a beautiful plump seed that with life bursts and germinates but once established, never flourishes. Tragic and deeply sad.     

Such a clever write, I now feel sad for one tear.....it died,

Very nice poem, as fleeting as a tear

Beautiful and very inspired Karen.

The poem reminds of a tear. Really nice one here Karen! Beautiful. S.

Excellent poem. Very moving.