Friday, October 3, 2008

Death Of A Suicidal Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Arm in arm,
Nearly frozen,
Her heart pulses harm,
Like the night his was stolen,
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Kyle Jones
COMMENTS

It's deep and catches me off guard. Such strong emotions, it's an AMAZING piece. I loved it.. Keep up the good work. -Trysta

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Camelia Boujalais 16 November 2009

I really love love, , this poem. And i enjoy reading all of your writings. You are so talented and bound to go far my larrrvelly: -) luvs it! !

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DEE RAAIN 01 November 2009

WOW so awesome being 18 i know how this feels. :) SO NICE! !

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Ashley LeBlanc 30 October 2009

woooow! beautiful! really, your words are so passionate, and flow together so well!

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Emily Maddison Saffron...x 02 September 2009

wow your really good... thats really deep but good and really sad...! !

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all i can say is wow

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**aShLeY~NiiChOl<3** 1013 14 August 2009

god- that was strong! its so sad- and you said it with such emotion. it was amazingly written. 10/10. you are talented!

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Saane Pahulu 09 August 2009

this is a brilliant master piece. really dark emotions about love and suicide. i loved it to bits kyle your are one talented individual! ! !

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Always About love 25 June 2009

Wow. Nice. It's crazy how things can be turned around huh? I know this feeling, and it sucks huh. Nice work, Keep it up.

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Aarraa Shaun 20 June 2009

Wow this poem is sooo deep and lovely. I'm definately attracted to the darkness of it all. Wonderful poem =) -Aarraa <33

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Kyrsten Gaddis 22 May 2009

Amazing poem. Love it

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Jaci Burns 13 May 2009

meaningfull, amazing and touching. WOW

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Callie Valentine 20 April 2009

Wow, this is really good. I love it.

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Nangula Immanuel 13 April 2009

Deep! real nice! very well written kyle!

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thats deep. i can somehow relate.10

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Carol Rhodes 18 October 2008

Kyle, very good read. Lots of strong emotion. Well expressed. Thank you, Carol

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Aijaz Asif 12 October 2008

an extremely great write indeed.....10/10

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Anita Blake 12 October 2008

great write. a ten from me

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Pandora Chaos 10 October 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! kyle that was sad, but very well written.10/10

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Ershad Mazumder 10 October 2008

Thanks dear jones. This is really a very good piece.

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Kyle Jones

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