A man under the bridge
Staring at cusped hands
Holding his piece of the river
Seeping slowly through
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nice...(thats all that i want to comment but PH doesnot let me comment in less that 20 words, funny: -))
Excellent piece of contemplation and great application of metaphor. I really enjoyed this and also can appreciate the sentiment. One question though, did you mean 'cupped' rather than 'cusped'? The latter refers to an object having pointed tips
I HAVE TROUBLE UNDERSTANDING THIS BUT THE PARTS THAT I DO MAKE THIS POEM AMAZING
How strange that the words of a chance met stranger you may never see again lodge themselves indelibly in your mind.I wonder if he remebers you
The wisdom of water nom? ....Great, I really, really like this!
its amazing how simple words can remain fixed in our mind and when we do something that memory rushes back to us in a blink of the eye Simply amazing